You'll have to redo your test, I think you misunderstood quite a few things.

If you're not good at cloning, you'll have to learn. Typesetting is a difficult job! Redrawing/cloning is a must! Have a look at your Reborn page: I can see that you just used Photoshop to auto-correct the page. Unfortunately, it doesn't look good. You have to manually redraw.

You have to use [rul=http://ieatsoul.com/training-ground/ieatmanga-specific-tutorial-and-guidelines/]these guidelines[/url] for your typeset test. We don't allow you to choose your own fonts for your Typeset Test.

Secondly, typesetters must erase all text that they are replacing (with the exception of SFX notes). For example, BB7 panel 4 on the left side of the bath tub. You're missing text there and all the Japanese text must be cloned out.

All text must also have punctuation at the end of it, unless it's a split bubble or sound effects. BB11 has lots of instances where that occurred. Please fix those.

I look forward to your redo. (:

Um, Karen~ I'm just taken in as the typesetter yesterday so, I won't be reviewing you... But, you really really need to see this tutorial http://ieatsoul.com/training-ground/ieatmanga-specific-tutorial-and-guidelines/ It's going to really help you~

Please not that ALL Fonts have to be in caps excluding augie. And you have to center all of the text~

P-please get ready~

BB 7
First Panel:
First Bubble and Second Bubble too small, they're shouting~ and you can nudge the 'ooo-' down~

Third Panel:
Too small, again, they're shouting~ and then the "weak" nudge it down a bit~ Move around the "Fu" as well~

Fourth Panel:
"Let's Explain", wild words. And all of this Panel's text aren't thoughts, so, it should be in black, roman. And the "His strength becomes lower..." is the text on this panel, not in a bubble on fourth panel~ Also, you left an empty bubble here, it's supposed to be "Aah, Gottcha."

Fifth Panel:
"It's ok, it's ok, don't cry" is supposed to be in the bubble before~ and you missed two lines here~ there's supposed to be "Don't cry..." And Be'el's bubble is "Fumi". A-and, I'm not sure about this one, but, well... the SFX should be put in as a notice like you did in Haruyuki~

BB 11
Third Panel:
Too small~ and please type it in all caps~ "Look away." Please nudge it around~ and it's probably too big~

Fourth Panel:
Nudge around the "Geeze."

Fifth Panel:
They're inconsistent~ match the two bubble's font size~ (I'm not sure about this one) and I think you don't need to use CCZoinks~

Sixth Panel:
First Bubble, too close to the edge~ and the second and the third bubble's words are switched~

Seventh Panel:
They're shouting bubbles~ please use CCZoinks~

DD 1
All fonts all caps, remember~? And "The first chapter..." It's not centered~ and you can clearly sees the fact that it was cloned~ And... I don't mind the font you use for "Judgement..." but, you should play it with the rules now~

DD 3
Second Panel:
Too small~ and all font all caps~

All panels after the second:
They're shouting bubbles~

FT 3
First Panel:
Type in all caps~ and also, you forgot to add the "?" After "Someone you..."

Second Panel:
Nudge "That's the Miko..." for a bit~

Third Panel:
Please center them~

Seventh Panel:
Too small~ bigger bubbles=bigger text~

FT 5
First Panel:
Shouting bubbles~

Third Panel:
Inconsistent font size~

Fourth and Fifth Panel:
Could be bigger, and please center them~

Sixth Panel:
I don't think "Begone" is in CCZoinks though...

FT 9
First Panel:
"They're gone.." Too big~

HB
Second Panel:
The fonts are too small~ and put "Of course. I'm a virgin." in Augie~ and I think "Do I really..." should be inside the bubble instead of the "Uwaaa" and you forgot the book title~

Third Panel:
I can still see the tips of Japanese letters here, and it's not thoughts~

Reborn (I know this page is really a devil ):
I can see the blurs very easily, and why don't you use 3 pt for the strokes? Because in my opinion, it's really thin~ and, please clone out the white line on Gokudera (the middle guy, if you don't read Reborn~)

Overall, it's good~ and, just a suggestion though, why don't you add your own punctuations~? Ahaha~ just a suggestion~

These are all the ones I realized, as I'm still new myself, maybe another sempai will review your work~

We're looking forward to your redo~

P.S: Call me chiri~ it's fine, everyone else use that name~

So is there anyone else going to review this as chiri say he is new and there might be other reviewing it and I dun have much time everyday because u have school in de day so i want to redo it in a go thanks and sry if u think I am being rude here

Um, it's 'kay~ take your time and don't rush~ I've contacted my senpai~ I think she'll contact you soon~ and I'm a she nano desu~! >,<

You're not being rude~ I've seen worse

EDIT: Gomenasai nano desu~ we usually reply with our critiques, and wait for your redo. I-I think you should do it with my review first. Since, I, the beginner have spot so many mistakes... b-but! I-it's up to you though...

Forgive me, I'm lousy at this stuff~

Sure, take your time~ we'll wait patiently~!

Karen, you missed half of what Chiri critiqued. Text size, type in caps, add punctuation. Go back and do your changes properly.

Hello i checked around alittle and found your app. Ill QC you and if you still want to redo please do <3 I made it in pictures cause its faster for me and its sometimes easier to understand with pictures ^^
http://www.sendspace.com/file/d5i5pr