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Over all you did good!
So I am gonna nit pick

Its up to the Devil if they want you to join the team.

Anyways

Beel
-good

BD
-good

D.grayman
-good, but I noticed there are some lines sticking out, and the 2nd panel,do you paint it all over D:

DD
-maybe you need some burning?
I think you use t.clean so much and I saw blacks at the right side

FT
-good, but I see grays in the bubbles.

Naruto
-grays should be lighter at the bottom side

Reborn
-underleveled.
level some more. and I see a junction. please merge the pages more carefully. If you have to redraw then redraw.

hey metalbror,

Defense Devil: some parts of the blacks and the greys look pretty strange. i think you should use different denoising settings. there are some parts of the blacks that need to be burned, you left some dust ^^

D.Gray-Man: not bad at all! please make sure you burned the blacks completely and get rid of all the grey that's not supposed to be on the whites though.

Fairy Tail: same here, please make sure all the blacks are completely black without dust etc on them. hmm would you mind getting rid of those black specks in the greys?

Naruto: looks good :D did you sharpen it? because the whole anti-alias thing is kind of gone >_> could you leave it a bit smoother?

Reborn: there's still a lot of grey blur on the whites, please make sure you get rid of that. also you should make the place where you connected the pages less obvious

good luck!

One more try!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/4h8cds

DGM: Grays still aren't what they are supposed to be and the gutter is still visible. (this is a terrible raw, isn't it?)

DD: Grays are too dark. You also slightly overleveled.

FT: Those grays have black spots, remove them. (you'll have to restart to fix them)

Naruto: Gray panels are blurry. Still overleveled and what have you done with the borders on the right?

Reborn: Good merge but not all the blacks are black and the whites aren't completely white.

The pages that are overleveled must be redone from the beginning. Once a page is overleveled it is almost impossible to fix it.
Good luck on your next attempt

guurgh the file won't load for me *slaps shitty internet*

i'll try again later today

oh never mind, it just loaded :D
i'll upload crits when i'm done ^^

here ya go:

D.Gray-man: it's overdenoised :/ please make it less blurry ^^ also remove dust and the gutter shadow.

Defence Devil: make sure the blacks are completely black and that there's no grey on the whites. hmm the greys are weird as well, make sure it's a bit smooth when you denoise it (not too much!) and level it a bit (also not too much :P).

Fairy Tail: you need to denoise this ^^

Naruto: there's still some dust in the blacks. overall look is good, but the structure of the screentones is completely lost D: make sure you preserve more of te structure next time.

Reborn: page merge looks good :D but the greys look strange, try different denoising settings. i can still find some random dust.

btw could you please also include the pages you passed already? it's easier to keep track of everything that way ^^ hehehe and maybe another cleaner can find something to nag about 

ciao! ^^

Can someone take a look att this?