Sorry, didn't notice it. I'll take a look at it in a few hours.
It took a little longer than expected, but here it is.
Reborn: The page is overleveled. There still are a lot of dusts on the whites and blacks. The grays have a lot of noise in them too, try to denoise this page a little different.
Naruto: This page has a lot of dust on it too and is slightly overleveled. It's also pretty blurry.
FT: Good, except for the noisy grays =/
DD: Pretty good too, there are some blurry spots and dusts on the whites/blacks. You can leave the grays like this on this page, they are really hard to get flat without ruining the rest of the page ><
DGM: Good, especially the grays except for the blur.
BD: I don't know what you did with the grays on this page but they are weird. some of the speedlines inside the sfx are gone too.
BB: Good.
Do you save your pages as jpg max quality? I don't think you do because the images are rather small in size. I think a lot of the problems will be solved by just saving on max quality.
Good luck on your next try ;)
