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Blizzack330's Cleaning Submission
« on: August 31, 2010, 05:03:35 AM »
Name/Nickname: Blizzack330
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: Canada, Pacific Time GMT: -8:00
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: itchy_fre4k@hotmail.com
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Cleaner
Why You Want This Position: Contribute to Reborn's scanlation community.
Your Time Available: I'll make time depending on the project.
Experience: None.

Test:
http://www.mediafire.com/?pc8myxd6v34xmwd

May not be completely accurate, but here are my estimates:

Beelzebub: 10 minutes
Blazer Drive: 15 minutes
D.Gray-Man: 15 minutes
Defense Devil: 20 minutes
Fairy Tail: 10 minutes
Naruto: 10 minutes
Reborn: 15 minutes
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Re: Blizzack330's Cleaning Submission
« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 09:19:03 AM »
hi blizzack!

i have to leave to school right now so i don't  have the time to comment in detail, but for your next try please keep these things in mind:

you have to work on your denoising, see this tutorial fo rmore help

also keep in mind that you have to make sure there is no dust in the blacks, so burn them. same goes for the whites, make sure there's no grey blur or grey specks on them.

good luck!
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Re: Blizzack330's Cleaning Submission
« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2010, 11:55:32 AM »
You need to work on your denoising and leveling. Look at DGM, it is almost completely black at the right side oO (this is a result of not removing the gutter shadow and then overleveling)

Some pages are overdenoised and are as a result really blurry (reborn and beelzebub)

You haven't burned all blacks or removed the dusts on the whites. (reborn especially)

The text your removed in the grays aren't cloned right, there are still traces of it left. (BD)

You should retry every page.

Good luck with your next try =)
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Re: Blizzack330's Cleaning Submission
« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2010, 06:27:59 PM »
Thanks for the quick replies =D

Here's a link to the re-done pages:
http://www.mediafire.com/?tbcmictvjtm9cs4

Personally, I think the greys look a lot better this time around.
ikore, unfortunately I don't really know the proper way to remove gutter shadows.
Do I need to remove it before leveling or do I remove it by leveling?
Also, how would I approach cloning the greys in BD?
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Re: Blizzack330's Cleaning Submission
« Reply #4 on: September 05, 2010, 08:00:08 PM »
*sorry for the late response, I forgot about this topic =X*

Beelzebub: The grays here need a bit of work, they have a weird pattern in them. You left some spots when burning the letter H. Remove that border at the right side.

BD: Same as last time. Be careful with the burn tool on speedlines (like in the sfx). Grays can be flatter.

DGM: The grays are too flat, you lose details this way. The grays on this page are really crazy ~_~ The gutter shadow is still visible inside the panel. Tutorial for this is here: http://www.unblessed.net/guide/cleaning/gutter.html

DD: Not bad, just remove some dusts on the whites. (2nd panel, kucabara's hair)

FT: Grays can be flatter and you forgot to rotate the page. Also burn the borders.

Naruto: Not bad, just make sure all the blacks are black. (last panel especially)

Reborn: Make sure all the blacks are black, like hibari's box weapon. The page split is still visible, clone it out. Remove the dusts on the whites, like the bottom right corner and remove that border on the right. Good job on the grays and levels.

This might help you a bit: http://ieatsoul.com/training-ground/common-cleaning-mistakes/

Good luck next at your next try ;
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